Room 12 Nelson Central School 2010

This term we are learning to write descriptions.  

We know that we have achieved this when we include:

- Who

- What they look like

- What they like or don't like

- How we feel about them.

This week we wrote descriptions about our Mum or Dad.

My Dad. 

By Charlie

My Dad is a football player.  My Dad looks like Grandad.  My Dad is cool.  My Dad likes to read the newspaper.  

My Dad

By Theo

My Dad is cool. My Dad likes reading. My Dad goes to the port.  He goes there every single day.  I love my Dad so so much.  My Dad likes reading the newspaper.  My Dad is so so so so cool!  The End.

My Mum

By Aidan

My Mum has hair.  She rides her bicycle.  My Mum doesn't like going to the supermarket.  I think my Mum is cool.  The End.  

My Dad

By Brook

My Dad has black hair.  My Dad is a good football coach for a team.  My Dad doesn’t like banana muffins.  My Dad likes fruit and there is something else that my Dad likes.  He likes bananas.  My Dad is cool.